Room 16 is comprised of eighteen year one students who are 5 years old. They wish to share their learning with you.

Monday, 29 August 2016

My Grandma McGarvey Duffy Book

Marius was our Duffy Certificate winner this week and he chose a Grandma McGarvey book.  He shared it with us as Room 16 enjoys her books and then Marius used the story in his writing.



"Grandma McGarvey went to the dump up the hill.  She got in her car.  She drove fast and all of her stuff fell out of the car.  She was upset."  By Marius

1 comment:

  1. Hi Marius
    I read that you were reading a book called "Grandma McGarvey". I read your writing and it was really good. Here's some ideas you could use for next time, you called use more interesting words like "she was disgusted". But anyways your writing was beautiful.

    By Lotu

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