"Grandma McGarvey went to the dump up the hill. She got in her car. She drove fast and all of her stuff fell out of the car. She was upset." By Marius
Monday 29 August 2016
My Grandma McGarvey Duffy Book
Marius was our Duffy Certificate winner this week and he chose a Grandma McGarvey book. He shared it with us as Room 16 enjoys her books and then Marius used the story in his writing.
"Grandma McGarvey went to the dump up the hill. She got in her car. She drove fast and all of her stuff fell out of the car. She was upset." By Marius
"Grandma McGarvey went to the dump up the hill. She got in her car. She drove fast and all of her stuff fell out of the car. She was upset." By Marius
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Hi Marius
ReplyDeleteI read that you were reading a book called "Grandma McGarvey". I read your writing and it was really good. Here's some ideas you could use for next time, you called use more interesting words like "she was disgusted". But anyways your writing was beautiful.
By Lotu